Hey guys. To those of you who were expecting something absolutely amazing to come of this as I was--I apologize. It's been months since I first started this--and for several reasons, I need to call it finished now.
Thanks to everyone who helped me out with this one! It made a huge difference and I appreciate it! :]
This is possibly the largest picture I've worked on. And if there's one thing I learned from this--it's that I definitely do not have the stamina to do this stuff XD; haha.
Anyways, I hope you guys like! It was my moster project of 2007--that ended up extending into 2008 D;!
Wow, you should do more stuff like this! Everything is so good! Only thing I would change, or think should change, is the lighting on his cheek. I don't think it would be that bright there. But that is my opinion.
Haha thanks <3 like I said elsewhere, crit all you want :9 It's good to know where the flaws are. But I won't go back to fix anything. Not now anyways. Maybe once summer rolls around and I'm bored or something. But definately not any time before that ; 3;
also--that bush on the right--leave it alone XD I knooow. hahaha ha...; w;
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.Always believed we could fly Through this life of bees.
Hahah, well this is just my opinion on it, but here goes.
First of all, I think one of the major problems is that the background and foreground blend together a bit. It's a bit hard to tell exactly how far back the burning part is in relation to the person and the canyon. You could fix it by outlining everything in foreground, including the plants, and/or giving them backlighting. Actually, I think backlighting on the plants in the foreground would really make them pop out more. Besides that, the only other thing is maybe the flaming butterfly- it seems a little small, since it's an important part of the piece, and it's just a little small for a butterfly in general.
It's still a beautiful piece though (I feel really bad for critting on it XD). I'm in awe of the detail in the background and the beautiful lighting on the person x_x
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If olive oil is made from olives, then what is baby oil made from?
Some people have been asking me about this stuff so I decided to gather all information in one single article on how to make your own portfolio, in a profesional and clean looking way. I hope it's useful, because these steps I myself take.
In this article I will provide you some ideas how you can build your own homestudio for considerably cheaper price than it would cost to use "official" studio gear. I will also show you few examples where I have used the gear I describe during this article.
DeviantArt is full of extremely well produced artistic fashion and fine art photographs. Make up. Styling. Creation of scenery. Story. Light. Glamour. A combination of these expressions sometimes make up a great photograph. But the protagonists of these pictures are usually female.
So... now it's the time for male models to come into focus.
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Looks good anyway, I think.
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All my art is copyright...!
Not that anybody would want to copy it, but...safety first kids!
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-When man found out milk came out of a cow, what do you think he was doing?-
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Make tea, not love.
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Departure to a new world. We are all fuzzy robots.
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"Human beings need fantasy to be human."
~Death
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Early to rise and early to bed - makes a man healthy but socially dead
This picture overall is amazing.
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It's so beautiful... the idea, the painting... aiee x_x
I actually have some crits on it for you though, but I won't say unless you want me to, since you seem to want to be done with it.
But the background... holyshit it's so good!
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If olive oil is made from olives, then what is baby oil made from?
like I said elsewhere, crit all you want :9 It's good to know where the flaws are. But I won't go back to fix anything.
Not now anyways. Maybe once summer rolls around and I'm bored or something. But definately not any time before that ; 3;
also--that bush on the right--leave it alone XD I knooow. hahaha ha...; w;
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.Always believed we could fly
Through this life of bees.
First of all, I think one of the major problems is that the background and foreground blend together a bit. It's a bit hard to tell exactly how far back the burning part is in relation to the person and the canyon. You could fix it by outlining everything in foreground, including the plants, and/or giving them backlighting. Actually, I think backlighting on the plants in the foreground would really make them pop out more. Besides that, the only other thing is maybe the flaming butterfly- it seems a little small, since it's an important part of the piece, and it's just a little small for a butterfly in general.
It's still a beautiful piece though (I feel really bad for critting on it XD). I'm in awe of the detail in the background and the beautiful lighting on the person x_x
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If olive oil is made from olives, then what is baby oil made from?
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